Wednesday, February 28, 2007

A Little Girl...


A little girl, scared and dreadfully alone, sits on the porch of a stranger's house and bursts into tears…
Her life seems so empty and hollow; she shivers and cries out from the pains and the fears…
A hand reaches out to her, touches her gently from the back and a voice calmly says:
Don't you worry little girl, I'm here now… I'll heal your soul and make you live better days…
She looks back and sees no one; just an empty porch, just another illusion her mind plays…
She finds herself all by herself yet another time in a total shock and an extreme daze…

1 comments:

zeezazoo on Wednesday, February 28, 2007 said...

WOW... i love this... i can imagine the video clip... at night, the air is a bit strong, some autumn leaves are flying infront of that little girl as her hair moves slowly, the moon is giving the only light in the scene, a small tear on her cheek... a hand reaches to her back and touches her gently and she hears that voice telling her these things... then she looks back and a small "tornado shape air move" throw some leaves in circles up to the sky as the girl watches her dreams go away with these leaves... then the camera starts filming from the sky with the move of one of these leaves and shows the little girl in her white dress still watching the leaves and crying... till it fades...
WOW.. i'm sorry.. but it really took me places... i wish this little girl is not you... other than that, the poem is amazing...

 

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