Faded hopes, lost wishes and many deceased dreams…
Despair fills her bones; she could feel it up to her head!
And she is swathed with ever-petrified fear and dread…
She allows in her bosom a picture of him to awake…
Yet observe him and their memories burn, wiggle and shake…
Dreaming time is over now, how warm his red cheeks blazed…
His tender hands covering his lips' goodbye as she, in awe, gazed…
The end looms in the air, deliberate and slow…
As he slowly drifts away and she watches him go…
6 comments:
this is weird, i was posting something about dreams in my blog and after i finished i checked ur blog and u r talking about dreams too... but i'm talking about different kind of dreams, the sleeping dreams...
anyway, i loved this piece of writing... nice words...
and a good lyrics for a song too, a sad one, but meaningful...
It was wired, I wanted to add a comment and there were 0 comments and when I got in to post it, I saw ur comment! :)
Just wanted to say that this is not the way I feel... Just being inspired by the cold weather outside and an image of two, any two, lovers being seperated!
I love this post. It's just so full of emotions and so descriptive. It frightens me because I can somewhat relate to what you say.
You are amazing, I love your writings!
there will be no time for dreams to end...
yet sometimes you should stop dreaming cz they make you loose people you adore!
Stoo wilt,
It shouldn't frighten you that you can relate to my writings... It should give you hope, just as it does with me... It makes me feel that I'm not alone and all these feelings I share with many people around the world... This makes life easier... Don't you think?
Thank you for stopping by... Thank you for your comment...
Anonymous,
I know who u r very well... You are not anonymous to me! So listen, dreams are sacred, they are important and precious. Never let anyone take them away from you... Even if it is someone you like or even love... I did that many times and ended up alone with no dreams and no hopes!!
wish i can display my dream instead instead of ANONYMOUS!
ill make sure il get rid of them cz i lost alot cz of them
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